dVerse-Poets Pub Poetry Challenge – Lookin’ Up! Choose 1 of the 4 photos that inspire a poem.
Photo Credit: ESA/Hubble
In the eye of the Fire
I see what is Unseen
by the eyes of earth
free of the burdens held
lighting the way dark
no fear of getting lost
no fear of the cost
freedom to soar beyond
the eyes of the earth
shielded by Fire’s burn
untouched by others
who only dream and yearn
Faith leading into the unknown
never lookin’ below
only lookin’ up
journeying above heaven’s periphery
where others fear to embark
and lose themselves in the dark
Yes, in the eye of the Fire
is where the Unseen is seen.
Oh this is wonderful! In the eye of the fire….so aptly fits with this Hubble image.
“freedom to soar beyond
the eyes of the earth”
and
“faith leading into the unknown.”
I love these phrases. Somehow, these photos have made me think about a real afterlife….that we are but a small part of life now…but perhaps become part of a much larger scope as we shed our shell. As we gain the freedom to soar beyond….It’s a lot to think about, yes? And that is the wonder of all these photos of what lies beyond us…shall we ultimately join it and lie beyond the touch of our bodily selves? Be a part of this splendid beauty beyond our realm?
Thank you so much for participating. I am loving your words here!
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Thank you so much for the wonderful, positive encouragement! And I say YES to all of your insightful questions! Much Love to you Lillian!
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Wonderful word imagery!
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Thank you! 😀 ❤
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I especially like your closing line.
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Thank you! 😀
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What I love in this is the whole concept of freedom from fear. That is a lifetime journey that each of us takes, following our own paths. Nice.
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Thank you! And you are right; this is a lifetime journey! Sweet Blessings, Deborah
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I thought your poem was filled with pieces of enlightenment. Always looking up as that is where faith will lead one.
Faith leading into the unknown
never lookin’ below
only lookin’ up
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Thank you for your very kind encouragement! Sweet Blessings, Deborah
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I liked the conclusion about where to see the Unseen.
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Thank you! 😀
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Love to see the freedom in the sky. Love it.
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Great poem to reiterate freedom form fear! I especially love these lines:
“in the eye of the Fire
is where the Unseen is seen.”
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Thank you for your kind encouragement!
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Same thoughts…Oh to dream these dreams😊
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😀 !
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Faith leading into the unknown…how else to go? Great inspiration expressed.
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Amen & thank you!
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Beautiful. 🙂
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