Vague Love – Sedoka Poem

The Daily Post – Vague

The Sedoka is an unrhymed poem made up of two three-line katauta with the  following syllable counts: 5/7/7, 5/7/7

The Katauta form was used for poems addressed to a lover. A single katauta is considered incomplete or a half-poem, however, a pair of katautas using the syllable count of 5,7,7 is called a sedoka

Vague Love

Your words say you love
your actions bring confusion
vague is your concept of love

Speak of love no more
for empty words cut the heart
blood is the tears that are wept

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3 thoughts on “Vague Love – Sedoka Poem

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